screen grab of edited music video

feedback

Performance/ Lip-syncing:

• overall good lip-syncing
• could add more performance
• add more variety of lip-syncing

Relationships between music and visuals:

• no obvious relationships
• effects fit well with the music
• keyboard and drums fit well

Camera work:

• good variation of shots
• very abstract

Editing:

• fast paced, well in time with beat
• fast paced and effective
• cuts between the drums are good

Special effects:

• Very good variety of special effects and it goes well with music
• good green screen
• well used effects and red flashing lights worked well

Mise-en-scene >Costumes, locations, props:

• Locations good asnd fit well
• good costumes
• props used well
• good church location
• good abstract
  

WORDS

we could also add titles in this style
on top of our video
(but without the annoying sound effects)

Instrumental

as well as more abstract shots with numerous effects, we have also decided to do some last minute filming of instrumental sequences of the song on a keyboard and shots of me singing the vocals in green-screen. bon apitite

Change of direction

due to difficulties concerning filming and filming arrangements , we have decided to make a more effects based video rather than a narrative piece. It was difficult for us to organize filming outside of college time due to the distance apart we lived from each other and the fact that many of us were busy for much of the time given, making it difficult for all of us to film at any date outside of college. as a result of this, we could only film material individually, on our own or together in college. this has obviously left us with limiting footage. to overcome this we have decided to use all the footage and edit it together to still create an interesting and exciting music video.